INTERNET
Internet is one of
technology that already exists in the world. Internet is very important in our
life because it very helpful in our daily life. But, internet makes people lazy
to think and there are some disadvantages from the internet.
There
are so many benefits from the internet. For the example is communication. The
main advantage of internet is the faster communication than any other devices.
It’s an instant process. Communication in the form of video calls, emails etc.
is possible using internet. There is no specific region that can be accessed.
It is accessible all over the world. The other benefits from the internet are
learning and communication. We can get some information that we don’t know yet
from the internet. From the internet we can get some entertainment likes
movies, song, videos and games.
Besides
that, internet has some disadvantages. The example is virus attack. The malware
or virus threats are so deadly that affects the system to a greater extend. It
immediately deletes all important files and finally the system ends up being
crashed. The virus attack is possible in three ways. One it attacks selected
files. Two, it harms the executable boot files and most dangerous of all is the
macro virus which has the ability to replicate and expand to all parts of
files. The other disadvantage from the internet is unable to keep schedule.
Teen are unable to keep track of the time they spend in doing activities.
In
conclusion, internet has advantages and disadvantages. If we use the internet
wisely, internet is very helpful and gives so many advantages for our daily
life. But, if we can’t use the internet
wisely, internet will be very danger in our daily life.
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