Globalization Changed Indonesia
Topic: How
has globalization changed Indonesia?
Supporting
Sentence 1: Globalization changes the technology of automotive.
Supporting
Sentence 2: Globalization change technology.
Supporting
Sentence 3: Food is also the impact of globalization.
Concluding
Sentence: In summary, Globalization already changes everything in many sectors.
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